overall i think the presentation went well, i felt i presented it the best that i could in terms of body langugage and the ability to engage with the audience. my presentation itself was ok, i produced a good amount of information however i think i left some of my research out which i was unhappy about. however the presentation seemed to be intresting, the trailer made a few people scared which was a good result.
things i could improve on was to look at more conventions of horror films to understand it more, another thing i was told tol look at was wider contexts (SHEP) i will look into this shortly. also i could have looked into more theorists and theorys surrounding my topic.
Monday, October 20, 2008
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www.
Good use of images in all of your slides.
great knowledge of topic
tried engaging withy audience
ebi.
You should have got some feedback from audience after the trailer clip.
Improve body language
more theorists and include SHEP
WWW-
eye contact.
confident with his text and knows what he wants to explore.
Slide show was bright and eye cahtchy which got the audience's attention.
EBI-
Involment of audience and let them share ideas with you.
WWW
Well entertained
Visual
Explained well
EBI
More chance for audience feedback
SHEP
Theorists
WWW:
-Good trailer
-Knowledge of the genre
-Interacted with audience
EBI:
theories
www -
- Good textual analysis
- Good idea of other texts
- Good communicational
EBI -
- Need some wider context (SHEP), some joke audience link bdw lolz!
WWW: good images used,
knew well about topic,
engaged audiene ot an extent
EBI: need to look at audience more,
look at the theorists related to your text and
include SHEP
WWW-
eye contact.
Good use of images.
Good reference to other texts.
EBI-
Do SHEP analysis.
WWW
-GOOD KNOWLEDGE OF TEXT
-GOOD LINKS TO OTHER TEXTS
-ENGAGES WITH AUDIENCE
EBI
-SHEP ANALYSIS
WWW
- Interacted well with the audience.
- Had a good understanding of the text.
EBI
- Do research on a key theorist linked to your topic called Carol Clover.
- Also work on SHEP
www: good usage of images.
good knowledge of text.
interacted with audience.
eye contact.
good presentation skills.
ebi: asked audience questions.
more aspects of shep were covered.
theorists.
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