Objectives

Feedback

WWW:
- Good genre theory
- Good research
- Presented Clearly
- Good Audience Theory

EBI:
- Make more reference to The Hills Have Eyes
- Cut down long sentances
- Don't keep saying "also"
- Talk more about Ideology and Narrative

Next Step:
-Introduce your film in more detail & keep linking theory back to your text
- Add page numbers on the footnotes
- Do more research - internet research especially